Week 7 Story: The Dharma in Vidura



The shrine itself was unremarkable, but its visitor was not. Vidura's annual pilgrimage was easier now than it was in the old days. The rush to return to the city was no longer necessary since he had stepped down as prime minister, and each year he enjoyed stretching his journey out longer.

The hermit greeted him each year in silence, but always offered him tea and food. Neither knew the other's name nor spoke, but each ate together near the fire each night. Vidura had tried to offer his own provisions in the early years, but the hermit always refused.

Each year Vidura approached the shrine, and each year he began his vigil. The incense came first, six bundles carefully placed in the basin below the weathered statue. He did not know who the statue was supposed to be, and it did not matter to him. This was not a rite of devotion, but of penance.

He chose the shrine forty years ago for its isolation, and it was here their remains were buried. Their names he never learned, and that he regretted to this day. Their faces he never forgot. The mother and her five boys, begging and hungry and gullible. To this day he asked himself whether their appearance was a sign of the gods, as he told himself so long ago. Low-castes would never be missed, the Pandavas had argued as the beggar family drank and gorged in a room deep within the doomed palace.

The morning after, while the smoke still rose to the sky, their bodies were discovered. The nation grieved for the Pandavas, but Vidura grieved for his soul. After the commotion died down, he sent a manservant to gather their remains. His hasty vacation after the Pandavas left was spent urging a pack-mule carrying six suspicious sacks up this lonesome mountain, and the hermit had seen him bury them all.

Vidura was glad the hermit never spoke.

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Author's note
The Mahabharata account of the palace of fire, planned execution site for the Pandava family, included a revolting bit of detail regarding their clever escape. Previously I had regarded the Pandavas as dashing, bold, and heroic figures. Until they killed an entire family of innocents with no hesitation. Vidura, the architect of their escape, is described as the incarnation of Dharma, which is to say, justice, law, and order. I found it hard to stomach that he could accept this happening, but equally hard to deny that he had knowledge of what occurred. So I wrote a story about his journey to forgiveness.

"...A low-caste woman and her five sons had come to the lac palace to beg food. The Pandavas gave them food, meat, and wine, and they ate and drank until they lay down in a drunken stupor. As they lay asleep, the palace took fire and, all unconscious, they perished in the flames."

The House of Fire, The Indian Heroes, C. A. Kincaid


Comments

  1. Hi Laura! I also did a retelling of this episode! I love how you chose to tell from a different perspective. I never would have though of the style you chose to use. I see this story in a whole different light now. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us! I look forward to reading more of you work. Jessie

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  2. Laura, I like your idea of going beyond the story and creating redemption for Vidura. I agree with your interpretation of the discrepancy with how he is described and then his actions in our reading, and can see him taking this sort of path in an attempt for atonement. You really capture his emotion and internal guilt in this story, and this is something I think would be a great addition to all your works (this is the first story of yours I have read so I do not know if it is something you have been doing or not).

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  3. Hi Laura!
    I really enjoyed reading your story “The Dharma in Vidura.” I liked how you changed the original story and decided to focus on the theme of forgiveness. I feel like this gives the story a brighter outlook compared to the dark tone of the original story. Overall, I think you did a great job on your story and I cant wait to see what you come up with next week!

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  4. Hi Laura, thank you for sharing this story with us! What a wonderfully written story. I am very impressed by your ability to capture the plot so well and to make known to the reader how intentional the characters are in the story. You really know how to tell a unique story. I can't wait to read more of your work soon! Keep writing!

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