Week 3 Story: Ashes
REIGN OF KING SAGARA
King Sagara’s grandson Anshumat found the ashes in an open
plain. The horse was there also, but hours
passed before he realized that the powdered grey sands he trod upon were the
ashes of his uncles. As any good nephew would, he searched for water to
consecrate their deaths. There was none. He traveled north, then east, and finally
south. In the far south of the plains he found a man, who explained that no
water would suffice for oblation save that of the Ganga, the holy celestial
rivers of heaven. Anshumat left the plain of ash, and returned the horse to his
grandfather. King Sagara despaired, but resolved to find some means of moving
the Ganga to earth.
King Sagara spent his reign in mourning for the loss of his
sixty-thousand sons.
He failed to attract the attention of the gods.
His rule
lasted thirty-thousand years.
REIGN OF KING ANSHUMAT
I wait.
Many thousand years
have passed, and I wait. My brothers wait with me, all save Asamanja. Sixty
thousand strong we lie in ashes, seeping through the soil beneath the plain. Lacking
limbs to feel and eyes to see, still we burn from the fire in Kapila’s eyes. Why
do we remain here? Did we not live good and virtuous lives? Did we not bring
glory to our father, and will he not release us with oblation? Why can we not
leave and enter our celestial heaven?
Is there a celestial
heaven?
Only stillness and
death for the sons of Sagara.
King Anshumat spent his reign in search of holiness, living
a life of purification and austerity on the Himavat summit.
He failed to attract the attention of the gods.
His rule lasted
thirty-two thousand years.
REIGN OF KING DILIPA
Kapila slumbered near
the stallion as we found him. We prepared to end his sleep, and his life. No
preparation could have saved us; his eyes blazed and we were consumed, rendered
screams and ashes. Shall we be doomed to eternal purgatory in this cursed
place? Many millennia have passed, and still we wait. We cannot leave this
place, though we have tried again, and again.
We are forgotten, and
we are doomed.
There are none who now
remember our names.
King Dilipa spent his reign obsessed with the Ganga and the
souls of his uncles, making innumerable sacrifices throughout his lifetime.
He failed to attract the attention of the gods.
His rule
lasted thirty-thousand years.
REIGN OF KING BHAGIRATHA
King Bhagiratha, the son of King Dilipa, devoted himself
unceasingly to the practice of holiness in pursuit of the Ganga’s water to
rescue the souls of his lost uncles. He lived a life of absolute ascetism, eating but once each
month, surrounding himself with the five holy fires, uplifting his arms to
heaven. Brahma saw and approved. Brahma descended before the king, and chose to
assist this pious man. Brahma advised King Bhagiratha that the help of Shiva
was necessary to pull the Ganga from the heavens.
King Bhagiratha worshipped Shiva then, and continued. He
spent one year in this pursuit, when Shiva’s eye turned at last.
Shiva agreed to allow Ganga to fall from heaven to earth,
but Ganga in her eagerness splashed atop Shiva’s head. Her impudence irritated
Shiva, and he forced her to wander within his hair for the next several years
as punishment.
King Bhagiratha resumed his devotions to Shiva, and Shiva at
long last cast Ganga from his head. She landed on the mountains and flowed down
through the plains until reaching the ocean, sinking into the underworld.
King Bhagiratha was rewarded for his lifetime of diligence, finally achieving peace for his uncle's souls with the waters of the holy Ganga.
His reign, for them, continues still.
Water!
Light!
Light, water, and
sound approach!
Ninety-three thousand years of darkness and
ash end now.
I wait no longer.
I am not forgotten.
Author’s note
The original story of Bhagiratha and Ganga tells of the
origins of the river Ganges. Told by Vishvamitra to Rama on their travels, the
sixty-thousands sons of King Sagara are killed by a sleeping Vishnu disguised
as the sage Kapila, and the descendents of King Sagara spend their lives trying
to find a way to let their souls transcend to heaven. This can only be done
with water, and he is informed that not just any water will do. The holy river
Ganga in heaven is the only water that can be used. Of all his descendants, only
Bhagiratha is determined enough to catch the attention of the gods, and upon
his success the river Ganga crashes down, nearly 100,000 years after the death
of King Sagara’s sons.
The retelling I chose was to focus on the viewpoint of the
dead sons; what would their tale be like waiting for that long? Would they
think they were forgotten by their family? I realize a wait is hardly the most
exciting thing to read about, but the idea of being stuck somewhere for
practically forever is rather horrifying to me, and that’s why I chose to focus
on this tale from their point of view. It’s a very dark tale, but I enjoy
those. And there is still a happy ending, so it’s not too dark.
Bibliography
“Bhagiratha and Ganga” from The Great Indian Epics by John Campbell Oman. Web Source
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Hey there, Laura!
ReplyDeleteI thought you had a really interesting topic to write about! I think you did a great job by using the perspective of the dead sons. That was really creative and something that I had not thought about. Your writing is very fluid and easy to understand. I can tell that you will excel in this class. I look forward to reading more of your stories!